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		<title>By: nancyholzner</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Sep 2010 18:45:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, Sharon, I&#039;m so glad you&#039;re looking forward to Hellforged! Nope, I didn&#039;t do too much tinkering. Mostly I checked for typos, but occasionally I&#039;d notice something like an &quot;echo&quot; when a word gets repeated too close to its first appearance or a place where a sentence didn&#039;t quite read smoothly. It&#039;s funny how those issues pop up, especially when I&#039;d been over and over and over this manuscript (I shudder to think how many times). But seeing it typeset does reveal stuff that gets missed in previous read-throughs.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Sharon, I&#8217;m so glad you&#8217;re looking forward to Hellforged! Nope, I didn&#8217;t do too much tinkering. Mostly I checked for typos, but occasionally I&#8217;d notice something like an &#8220;echo&#8221; when a word gets repeated too close to its first appearance or a place where a sentence didn&#8217;t quite read smoothly. It&#8217;s funny how those issues pop up, especially when I&#8217;d been over and over and over this manuscript (I shudder to think how many times). But seeing it typeset does reveal stuff that gets missed in previous read-throughs.</p>
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		<title>By: Sharon</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Sep 2010 17:44:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Nancy it must really feel like such a reward to see your first site of the new proofs in galley format.  I have only written college English papers but I understand the urge to tinker with your work, just change a word here or paragraph there.  I look forward to this new book so please don&#039;t tinker too much.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nancy it must really feel like such a reward to see your first site of the new proofs in galley format.  I have only written college English papers but I understand the urge to tinker with your work, just change a word here or paragraph there.  I look forward to this new book so please don&#8217;t tinker too much.</p>
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